daylyn ([info]daylyn) wrote,
@ 2007-06-14 01:01:00
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Fic: The Stakeout
Title: The Stakeout
Author: [info]daylyn
Fandom: Sherlock Holmes
Pairing: SH/JW
Rating: R
Warnings: Um… riding crop porn.
Disclaimer: Not mine, although actually in the public domain. No profit is intended.
Summary: Holmes brings his riding crop on a stakeout, leading to some interesting moments for Watson.

Author’s Note: Written in honor of Fawn’s discussion of REDH on the Holmesslash Yahoo Group. Fawn lamented that Holmes’ riding crop really didn’t come up enough in slash. So, instead of going to sleep, I wrote this. *hides*


The Stakeout

I cannot believe he brought his riding crop.

We wait, crouched in a darkened room, for our culprit to arrive, our only illumination provided by moonlight streaming through the dirty window. The dust is thick in this abandoned house, but Holmes assures both Lestrade and me that our criminal will be here, tonight, to finalize his dastardly plan.

I know our quarry is dangerous. I know I must be alert. I must pay attention. But damn, how am I to concentrate when Holmes is stroking that infernal crop!

Oh, it seems innocent enough. Surely Lestrade thinks that Holmes’ actions are just a release of nervous energy. Anyone who would see him would surmise as much. But I, who know him so well, know that he is purposefully tormenting me.

His long, sensitive fingers run over the handle length, slowly, teasingly, barely touching the crop, and then moving steadily to gently caress the knob on the end. My body begins to respond.

Holmes doesn’t look at me; he doesn’t look at anything except the riding crop in his hands.

My breath quickens.

“Are you alright, Doctor?” Lestrade questions, looking concerned.

I swallow hard. “Perfectly fine, Inspector,” I answer, giving him a quick, albeit strained, smile. “Just a little tired of the waiting, that’s all,” I explain.

“I understand perfectly,” Lestrade says peevishly. “How much longer do you think we have to be here, Mr. Holmes?”

Holmes smiles at me and continues his stroking. His caresses become firmer, longer, sliding down the entire end of the handle. I glare at him.

Holmes never stops his stroking. “I’m certain that the ultimate event will occur soon enough, Lestrade. Have some patience,” he says, forming a tightened grip around the riding crop and leisurely pushing it through his hand.

I cannot help myself; I think back to our prior time together. My God, it was only last night. Holmes used the crop upon me, stinging my buttocks in that delightful manner that always leaves me pleading with him for release. But release was slow in coming. He taunted me, lightly stroking my entrance with that selfsame handle now firmly in his grasp. Then, when I could take no more, he finally, finally pushed the riding crop inside of me.

I grow impossibly hard at the memory.

“Are you quite sure that you’re alright?” Lestrade asks me, interrupting my thoughts.

I glare again at Holmes and try to get my breathing under control. “Quite fine,” I lie to Lestrade. “It’s just the dust in here.”

The Inspector looks from me to Holmes, who affects an air of artful innocence. Lestrade frowns, looking perplexed. “If you’re sure…” he finally says. He doesn’t look convinced.

I nod, not trusting my voice.

“When will he come?” Lestrade asks impatiently.

Holmes looks at Lestrade and then at me. “Oh, I’m sure he’ll come very soon,” he says in a steady voice.

My eyes widen. No, surely he couldn’t mean…

Lestrade nods and looks out the window, obviously bored with his surroundings and his companions.

I turn to Holmes, my eyes pleading, begging him not to do what I know he’s about to do. He’s taken the riding crop and placed it near his lips, moving the handle back and forth oh so slowly. His eyes meet mine, and I can see just the tiny bit of his tongue peeking out.

I clench my fists and try to control my breathing.

Holmes glances at Lestrade to confirm that he’s still preoccupied. He then drags the tip of his tongue over the length of the handle until he finally reaches the knob. Looking me directly in the eyes, he places the end of the riding crop in his mouth and sucks, hard.

I find my release.

I must give a strangled moan, for Lestrade is at my side in an instant. “Doctor,” he says insistently, “whatever is wrong?”

But then Holmes is there, gentling me, answering when I cannot. “It looks like the good Watson has developed a cramp,” he says reasonably.

I’m about to agree, but we hear a noise coming from the front door. “He’s here,” Holmes whispers fiercely, brandishing his crop as a weapon and springing into the next room. Lestrade quickly runs after him.

I gather myself for a moment and then grab my revolver, wondering how I’m ever going to make it through this night. Then I follow Holmes, as I always do.



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[info]ladysevsnape
2007-06-14 09:14 am UTC (link)
Um... wow... suprisingly hot! *giggles* Never really thought of that as a fandom but wow... this story is very very good!

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[info]daylyn
2007-06-14 02:16 pm UTC (link)
Thank you. This just came to me suddenly and I couldn't go to sleep until I had written it.

Never really thought of that as a fandom
I discovered this fandom, basically by accident, a few months ago, and I absolutely fell in love with it. There's something unexpectantly hot about two repressed Victorian gentlemen... it must be all the UST.

Glad you liked the fic!

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[info]lilka
2007-06-14 09:36 am UTC (link)
GUH. Wow, that was really, really hot. Evil Holmes, tormenting poor Watson like that. I hope he makes it up to him later. Great little fic, thanks for sharing.

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[info]daylyn
2007-06-14 02:18 pm UTC (link)
Thanks so much. Yes, Holmes is an evil tease, isn't he? I think tormeneting Watson is one of his favorite activities. No wonder Watson claims to be long-suffering. Glad you enjoyed the fic.

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[info]emeraldreeve
2007-06-14 10:08 am UTC (link)
Very hot! I feel for Watson. :)

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[info]daylyn
2007-06-14 02:19 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! Yes, poor Watson, although I expect that he'll get revenge. Glad you liked it.

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[info]sheet_squirrel
2007-06-14 10:45 am UTC (link)
Hot! And Holmes is so cruel. In a good way. :)
xXx

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[info]daylyn
2007-06-14 02:22 pm UTC (link)
Thanks! Glad you liked Holmes' "cruelty".

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[info]evilleaper
2007-06-14 11:29 am UTC (link)
Fans self. There really should be more crop porn. Thanks for sharing.

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[info]daylyn
2007-06-14 02:24 pm UTC (link)
There is definitely a dearth of riding crop porn. We must all endeavour to correct the situation!

Thanks for reading. Glad you liked it.

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[info]the_callum
2007-06-14 12:18 pm UTC (link)
A riding crop. Now there's an idea... ;o) This delightfully hot little story made me laugh out loud. Poor poor Watson. Mean Holmes. What a perfect couple.

(I personally wonder how long Holmes cleaned the thing before he even dared think of getting it close to his mouth...)

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[info]daylyn
2007-06-14 02:27 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! I now know why Watson is so "long-suffering" -- Holmes enjoys teasing him too much.

(I personally wonder how long Holmes cleaned the thing before he even dared think of getting it close to his mouth...)

*snort* You know, I actually had that problem while writing this. But then I figured that Holmes is quite fastidious and Watson must have a lot of disenfectant and... I just closed my eyes and went for it.

Glad you liked it.

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[info]beledibabe
2007-06-14 01:19 pm UTC (link)
Heh. Heh.

Wonder how the good Doctor gets his revenge?

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[info]daylyn
2007-06-14 02:28 pm UTC (link)
It will probably involve the riding crop!

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[info]almostlifesized
2007-06-14 02:48 pm UTC (link)
Hot... Guh. Oh my. Never thought a riding crop could be so sexy.

I want to see his revenge. Pretty please with a top hat?

*reads again*

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[info]daylyn
2007-06-14 02:58 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! There's something so inherently phallic in a riding crop -- and they have so many uses!

I want to see his revenge.

I can't make any promises, but I'll try. Maybe inspiration will come to me and I'll have another sleepless night fantasizing thinking about Watson taking control of the crop.

Glad you liked the fic.

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[info]almostlifesized
2007-06-14 03:02 pm UTC (link)
It is, indeed. I can truly picture Holmes like that, all smug and sexy :D I love tease!Holmes. But maybe flustered!Holmes is even hotter :D Good luck, then *Grin*

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[info]vsbooklady
2007-06-15 08:02 am UTC (link)
*I want to see his revenge. Pretty please with a top hat?*

DEFINITELY with a top hat. and a crop. and maybe a cravat tied to the bedpost. please?

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[info]redconverse
2007-06-14 03:33 pm UTC (link)
Ah, good ol' cock-tease Holmes!

This was nice and smutty. I do hope for a revenge piece... But just seeing some riding crop porn was nice enough! ;D

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[info]daylyn
2007-06-14 03:46 pm UTC (link)
Yes, and poor, suffering Watson.

Glad you liked it. Riding crop porn has lots of potential.

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[info]liederlady221b
2007-06-14 04:27 pm UTC (link)
*pant* Holmes is e v i l. Evil, I say.

Watson is so blessed lucky! The canonical crop is "loaded" which might prove a bit dicey for Watson-whipping, but knowing Holmes, he has two: one for carnal use and the loaded one for criminal! The latter may provide some crossover opportunities for really BAD (but pretty) criminals! ;-P

WONDERFUL work, particularly Holmes' "he'll come very soon."

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[info]daylyn
2007-06-15 03:36 am UTC (link)
Thank you! Evil!Holmes is quite fun, I must admit.

The canonical crop is "loaded" which might prove a bit dicey for Watson-whipping
Really? That's good to know.

but knowing Holmes, he has two: one for carnal use and the loaded one for criminal!
I love this idea, and it certainly makes things more... er... hygenic. And I can definitely see Holmes ready to punish the "pretty" criminals... and Watson leading him away.

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[info]spikejem
2007-06-14 05:51 pm UTC (link)
Bad Sherlock, no buscuit! I'd say Holmes is an evil genius for torturing his poor lover so -- especially in front of company.

He has developed a cramp, indeed. Great work!

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[info]daylyn
2007-06-15 03:38 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much! Holmes is fun as an evil, tormenting cock-tease. Poor Lestrade, he's bound to wonder (and probably figure out) what was going on there.

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[info]anoziraes
2007-06-15 01:21 am UTC (link)
I second the plea for a sequel in which Holmes gets his...

This was fabulous, your riding crop porn is an undeniable success (now tell Holmes to wipe that smug look off his face!)

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[info]daylyn
2007-06-15 03:42 am UTC (link)
Thank you! I'm thrilled that this little ficlet was so well received -- the idea suddenly came to me and I just had to write it. And I think I've got an idea for a sequel... maybe (I make no promises, but Watson is pestering me to let him have a go at Holmes).

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Riding Crop
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2007-06-15 03:38 pm UTC (link)
bet they're gonna go back and ride each other. Excellentpiece of writing!! Enjoyed it a lot.

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[info]method22madness
2007-06-16 02:50 am UTC (link)
and the best part was, during all this hot leather flirting and teasing between Holmes and Watson, Lestrade stands on, absolutely none the wiser

I cant express how much I loved this story!
*cheers*
awesome

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[info]daylyn
2007-06-16 07:34 am UTC (link)
Poor, oblivious Lestrade. Although there have been some thoughts that he goes home and realizes in the middle of the night what they were up to. Of course, he's then conflicted -- does he arrest them, beg to join them, or go get his own riding crop and perform unspeakable acts on Hopkins? Hmmm...

I'm so happy you liked this. Thank you so much!

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[info]karaokegal
2007-06-16 07:03 pm UTC (link)
Riding crip smut FTW!!! Awesomely kinky and hot and totally in character. On my (ahem) knees, begging for more.

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[info]daylyn
2007-06-17 07:29 am UTC (link)
Thank you! Holmes the cock-tease was quite fun to write. And as for a sequel... well, I do have an idea (now I just have to find the time -- the past few days have been bizarely busy).

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[info]calliopepurple
2007-06-17 04:57 am UTC (link)
See the icon? That's what this did to me. Very hot and very well written. I just started looking for Holmes/Watson fic and this makes me hopeful about finding more of good quality.

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[info]daylyn
2007-06-18 08:32 am UTC (link)
Thank you! And welcome to the fandom. There are so many talented authors who write absolutely amazing stories. My little works pale in comparsion to some of the great stuff I've read.

I suggest you take a look at Lyra's Holmes/Watson links page:
http://www.liquidfic.net/Holmes_Watson.html

It has updates of new stories, her recommendations, and lots and lots of links to lots of stories and archives. It's a great resource for getting starting in the love that is H/W.

Enjoy!

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[info]sherlock2040
2007-06-17 11:29 am UTC (link)
hehehehehehe

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[info]daylyn
2007-06-18 08:33 am UTC (link)
*snicker* Thanks!

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[info]amphritie
2007-06-21 10:49 pm UTC (link)
Oh, wow...I loved this. Its very interesting to see Holmes tormenting Watson in a very..original way. ;)

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[info]daylyn
2007-06-22 02:44 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! Holmes is definitely the creative sort.

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[info]kumu2345
2007-07-13 03:27 am UTC (link)
(God, I'm late in commenting on this.) Just kinda got into the fandom and thinks this is a wonderfully written piece. Sherlock teasing Watson with the riding crop was cetianly amusing. I think the last time I read anything with a riding crop used like this (I think) was in the "1776" fandom. And Lestrade was so oblivious...XD

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[info]daylyn
2007-07-23 02:24 am UTC (link)
Well... I'm late in reply, so we're both even ;)

Thanks for your comments. This is a wonderful fandom (I found it myself just a few months ago and I fell in love with it). So glad you liked my little riding crop fic -- oblivious Lestrade was one of my favorite parts.

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[info]nekosmuse
2007-07-25 01:06 pm UTC (link)
I'm really very late in responding to this (I'm such a horrible fangirl), but I now that I've read it, I couldn't not comment. My God. I knew there was a reason Holmes kept that riding crop, but... yeah.... That was delightfully amusing (not to mention quite steamy). Well done, indeed.

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[info]daylyn
2007-07-25 03:22 pm UTC (link)
Why thank you! Yes, I think Holmes keeps his crop handy for many reasons... much to Watson's delight dismay.

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[info]darketernal09
2007-08-17 12:40 am UTC (link)
that was brillant! very good job! Holmes can be one evil, sadistic bastard, but that's why we love him so :)

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[info]daylyn
2007-08-17 05:12 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! Holmes' "evilness" is one of the things that makes him so damn irrestible, isn't it? Glad you liked this.

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[info]cs_whitewolf
2007-09-24 08:52 pm UTC (link)
I was just reccing this fic to a friend of mine when I realised that I hadn't actually reviewed it before :0 So, firstly, my apologies for that! And secondly- thank you for such an enjoyable read. I feel proud to blame you for my continued fascination with all things SH/JW related, heh!

...and with a riding crop too!? You naughty girl ;D can I marry your dirty imagination?

Keep writing!
Peace,
CS WhiteWolf

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[info]daylyn
2007-09-25 06:33 am UTC (link)
Thank you! A review is always such a wonderful surprise -- I'm just thrilled that you liked my little piece, especially enough that you would rec it. Thanks again.

And I'm so happy to have introduced you to the world of Sherlock Holmes slash. Come and stay (and play) a while.

I have so many stories in my head -- my hardest thing is actually getting them onto the screen. But I've started two stories *sigh* and one of them is (somewhat) close to being finished. So I promise to keep writing more. Soon. Really.

Hope your Mom is doing well!

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[info]cs_whitewolf
2007-09-25 08:03 pm UTC (link)
I do hope you'll consider writing more, er... riding crop fic ;) I'm rather attached to the idea after reading this and it's sequel! heh.

Am I allowed to ask what you're working on? or are you the type to keep mum until you're all done an posting? I know what you mean though, some times you just need a good hard kick up the arse before you're able to get things written- or at least that's how it works with me!

And thank you :) my mom is doing well at the moment, which is such a relief really!

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[info]daylyn
2007-09-27 06:29 am UTC (link)
I'm so glad to hear that your mom is doing better. Hoping she stays that way!

Thank you again for your compliments. I do have some ideas for the continuation of the riding crop series. And you're right -- I'm definitely one of those writers who needs a good kick in the arse every now and then. I always start something, get distracted, and then it takes me forever to get back to it.

But I'm thrilled that you're asking what I'm working on. Maybe you can kick me in the arse and get me to finish.

The first story (the one closest to being done) is sort of a take on the Charles Augustus Milverton canon blackmail story. Holmes really, really, really dislikes this blackmailer. There's quite a bit of fandom speculation that Holmes has had some sort of personal interaction with him in the past. There are also theories that either Holmes or his only friend at university, Victor Trevor, were victims (when Milverton blackmailed them after discovering their scandalous love affair). So I'm taking these theories and writing a fic where Watson discovers why Holmes hates Milverton and that Victor Trevor was Holmes' first lover. Of course, Holmes ends up with Watson -- after a bit of emotional angst.

The second one I started (which is a long, long way from being done) is what I call my Watson torture fic. I think I had told you that in the canon, Holmes disappears for three years because he's afraid for his life. During this time, Watson thinks he's dead (and Watson's wife also seems to die during this period). The Holmesslash Yahoo group was speculating why Holmes didn't contact Watson, and one of the ideas that came up was that Holmes was actually trying to protect Watson because if Watson knew where Holmes was then his life would also be in danger. In my barely started fic, Colonel Moran (the primary person trying to kill Holmes) does indeed capture and torture Watson in order to try and gain info on Holmes as well as to use Watson as bait. I have all the ideas for this fic in my head, but it's going to be long and complicated. And angsty. But with a happy ending. Yay.

Also planned but not yet started are another story in the riding crop series. I will start this soon. Promise.

I also have this idea for a fic where Holmes was in love with Watson but thinks he has no chance and is actually "friends with benefits" with Inspector Lestrade from Scotland Yard (which allows them to safely seek the company of another man without fear of exposure, since homosexuality was illegal and punishable by two years of hard labor at the time). Of course, Holmes "dies", Lestrade realizes that Watson loved Holmes just as much, and then he gracefully steps aside and cleverly manipulates them to be together when Holmes returns.

Another thought is a story that takes place after WWI and opens with Watson standing by Holmes at Holmes' brother Mycroft's funeral. I have this great visual for the cemetary scene and I have some thoughts, but I'm really not sure where to go with this.

I also have some other random story ideas, but I've rambled on long enough now. If only I could write these fics as easily as I write LJ comments!

So, please feel free to kick me in the arse! Thanks.

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[info]cs_whitewolf
2007-09-27 07:21 pm UTC (link)
::pulls on her biker boots:: ...well, you did ask for it! ;D

I find your ideas for further Holmes fic very intriguing, and you can be sure to have me pestering you about them from this point onwards. Let it not be said I'm never the persistent sort, heh.

In regards to the first story you mention, I actually had a moment of squee when I realised that I recognised the 'Charles Augustus Milverton canon blackmail story'! I'd seen that episode on tv not all that long ago and I can't tell you how delighted I am to know the canon behind it, it makes me appreciate the idea of your fanon idea all the more. It's truely an interesting idea for a story, especially one going back to the route of his dislike of Milverton through his love affair with this friend of his, and I certainly hope you'll put more of your efforts into completing it. From the Holmes stories you've already written, I know you'll do it justice, so consider this one firm kick up the backside to get a move on with this one, okay? :D

Your second idea actually has me grinning rather wickedly, I'm afraid. I'm such a fan of hurt/comfort/torture fics, heh. You have mentioned to me about Holmes' three year absence, I think the idea of him leaving for so long and without word is certainly cause for fanfic- there is so much you could do with that idea (and I must be honest, I've been thinking about it myself recently, but more in terms of him going away with the Doctor (from Doctor Who, if you're at all familiar with that?)) Were you planning to have Holmes come back when he hears of Watson's captive? You know, doing the whole 'saving the day' kind of thing? As soon as you get the first fic done, I'll proceed with the arse kicking for this one ;)

Ohh! Your Holmes-was-inlove-with-Watson fic sounds very good too! You have such exciting ideas for this fandom. I really do hope you'll find the time to expand upon these small synopsis' you've been teasing me with! And I definitely want more riding crop fic ;) it's your own fault for making it read so well! haha

Another thought is a story that takes place after WWI and opens with Watson standing by Holmes at Holmes' brother Mycroft's funeral. I have this great visual for the cemetary scene and I have some thoughts, but I'm really not sure where to go with this.

I don't know if you're a fan of just writing 'moments', but I sometimes like just writing a scene that might/could/should happen with certain characters. For fics like this you don't have to spend a great deal of time explaining the hows and whys behind the story, you just drag your reader into the 'moment' and tell your story from there. If that makes any sort of sense? Maybe not. It could just be me! XD

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[info]daylyn
2007-09-28 04:48 pm UTC (link)
Ooh. Biker boots. Nice incentive. Very... er... exciting. Oops. I meant frightening.

If you saw the Granada series adaptation of the Milverton story, that's actually one of my favorite episodes. They actually expanded quite a bit from the original story, but they did a brilliant job of it. That's probably why I became so intrigued with wanting to write about that time. And now that you've brought out the biker boots -- I'll keep working at it ;)

I have to admit that I'm also a fan of hurt/comfort/torture fics (poor Watson, I'm afraid he's in for a really bad time). And I actually have a whole plot outlined for this story (in my head of course). It includes a letter from Holmes that he writes in a fit of despair, explaining the situation and (of course) admitting his feelings. Holmes throws it into the fireplace of where he's currently hiding, but one of Moran's agents retrieves it. Thus, Watson is captured because they know that Holmes will have to come and rescue him. He does, even though he knows he's walking into a trap. And then I have scene after scene (in my head) of what happens from there. If only there was a way that I could extrapolate what's into my head directly into the computer -- although that sounds like a premise of some horrid sci-fi world domination fic. Anyway, I have too much detail for this story worked out not to write it. *kicks myself to get started*

And you're right, the Hiatus and the Return (the times of Holmes' disappearing and the time he comes back) absolutely beg for fan fiction. And a lot of it exists (most of it excellent). I think that, at some point, every H/W writer takes a stab at the Return. In fact, that was my first attempt at this fandom -- Returns and Revelations:
http://daylyn.livejournal.com/13826.html

Sadly, I'm not that familar with Doctor Who (I know, a terrible oversight on my part), but I think that a crossover would be a great idea. I'd love to read it. I think it would explain a lot of why Holmes goes AWOL. I would definitely read "The Final Problem" and "The Empty House" stories so you have the context of what Watson claimed happened.

I also really like your idea of just capturing a "moment" for my post-WWI fic idea. I think I could work with that.

OK, now that you've got your boots on, I'm going to have to start writing (er... after I go to work. Oh, and I after I prepare the professional writing sample I need for a job interview for Monday. *sigh* Soon, I'll write. Promise.)

Anyway, thanks for listening and thanks for the encouragement!

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